Story 8: The Cleansed - Revisited

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She guides you into the home.

Your voice steady.

“We’re going to start in the basement.”

The wife tilts her head.

Too calm.

That faint smile never leaving her lips.

“As you wish.”

Her demeanor unsettles you.

Almost like a different person this time around.

This time around…

You’re still trying to wrap your head around how any of this is possible.

It’s starting to feel like a bad dream.

She leads the way inside.

Your team follows close, breath shallow, gear in hand.

The house swallows you whole.

The floor creaks as you reach the stairs.

You remember the symbols.

The melted wax.

The circle that pulsed like it was alive.

The wife lingers at the top of the steps.

“You’ll find what you’re looking for down there,” she says softly.

Her tone too measured.

Almost rehearsed.

Chris leans close and whispers,

“She wanted us here. You know that, right?”

Ah, Chris.

You’ve seen a lot of strange hauntings together.

But this one might take the cake.

The air grows colder with each step.

Your gut twists.

But you keep going.

Each stair cracks beneath your boots.

Your heartbeat pulses in your chest… in your hands.

The basement waits.

But when you reach the bottom—

it’s gone.

The concrete floor stretches bare and cold.

No wax.

No scorch marks.

Not even a trace of ash.

Chris mutters, “This isn’t possible.”

Another teammate whispers, “We all saw it. We all saw it.”

Your chest tightens.

If the circle was real, someone erased it.

If it wasn’t…

then maybe the house is rewriting itself.

Just like it did with time.

  • The air stings cold.

    Your breath fogs in the morning light.

    Your head - pounding.

    The house looms behind you, unchanged.

    Silent.

    Waiting.

    Chris taps your shoulder.

    You glance at him. 

    He looks mortified as he points towards the house.

    You turn, dazed.

    The couple is there.

    “Thank you for coming all this way,” the man says.

    The woman’s eyes flick nervously toward the house.

    “It’s been different today. Like it knows you’re here.”

    Your stomach twists.

    Every word is familiar.

    You’ve heard this before.

    A teammate whispers,

    “We didn’t just black out.

    We’re back at the start.”

    You fight the rising panic.

    This can’t be possible. 

    Did you make the wrong choices the first time?

    Was sealing the circle a mistake?

    Is this all a dream?

    The couple watches, waiting for you to respond.

    Last time, you trusted them.

    Took their story at face value.

    But now…

    You’ve seen the basement.

    The circle.

    The symbols.

    The candles.

    You’ve seen the wife watching from the window.

    Was she the one feeding it?

    Was this her ritual all along?

    Another teammate whispers,

    “If they’re hiding something,

    maybe this time we can prove it.”

    The weight of it settles in your chest.

    This isn’t just about cleansing a house.

    This is about breaking a cycle.

    A loop you are now trapped inside of. 

  • You force yourself to smile.

    Your voice feels heavy in your throat.

    “Thanks for meeting us out here,” you say.

    The couple relaxes, if only slightly.

    Your team shifts uneasily behind you.

    They know the truth.

    They know you’ve been here before.

    But no one says a word.

    You reassure the couple again.

    That they are in good hands.

    That you are here to help.

    Last time you simply asked if they’d be available by phone.

    But this time, something must change.

    The husband offers the keys.

    “We’re staying with friends tonight.”

    You shake your head.

    “Actually… if your wife wouldn’t mind staying, it could help the investigation.

    It’s not uncommon. Sometimes the house responds better with a family member present.”

    They exchange a look.

    She touches his arm, steadying him.

    Then they both nod.

    He forces a smile.

    “Well, I’ll leave you to it then. She wasn’t up for the game anyway. This is more her thing.”

    She looks at you. Still.

    Too still.

    Something inhuman in her calm.

    “Shall we?” she says.

    You hesitate at the threshold.

    The same place where you saw the shadow figure dart last time.

    The house seems to breathe.

    Waiting.

    One teammate whispers, barely audible.

    “Are you sure this is a good idea? We could just go home.”

    You ignore it.

    Maybe this isn’t about the house at all.

    Maybe it’s the person who needs cleansing.

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  • You burst into the cold night air.
    Breath fogs.
    Hands shaking.
    For a moment, you’re not sure if you’re awake.

    Snow crunches under your boots.
    The house looms behind you,
    windows dark,
    but still somehow alive.

    Consciousness drips back like water.
    Slower than you’d like.
    You look at your team…
    wide-eyed, pale.
    Someone drops their gear into the snow.

    Then movement.
    One member stumbles out later than the rest,
    holding his chest,
    gasping for breath.

    He looks at you.
    “Whatever was in there…”
    He chokes on the words.
    “I saw a glimpse of it.
    It was ancient.
    I felt like it was controlling me.
    And when I looked at you…
    I wanted to kill you.”

    Someone gasps.
    That definitely sounds bad.
    But you can’t find the space right now
    to react.

    You raise your hands.
    Calm.
    Slow.
    Grounded.

    “This fear…” you tell them.
    “It’s just empowering it.
    We have to stay grounded.
    We came here to help these people.”

    The snow is silent.
    Everyone watches you.

  • The cold burns your lungs.
    But curiosity cuts deeper than fear.
    You nod to the group.

    “We get more answers.
    Then we bless the home.”

    No one argues.
    The silence between you is heavy.
    Everyone knows it…
    you have to understand what you’re dealing with.

    You step back inside.
    The team huddles behind you.
    The house is quiet.
    Too quiet.

    Wait.
    The equipment.
    Everything is off.
    Recorders. Cameras.
    Atmospheric sensors streaming to your laptops.
    Dead.

    But the lights in the house are still on.
    Your team spreads out, checking the gear.
    Confused.
    Bewildered.
    And just before you speak…

    Footsteps.

    Slow at first.
    Then louder.
    Faster.
    Until a giant thud shakes the ceiling above.

    Someone whispers,
    “We’re absolutely sure no one else is in here, right?”

    You know in your gut.
    You’re alone.

    The footsteps start again.
    This time running down the stairs.
    Then pounding through the hall
    charging straight toward you.

    The scream hits.
    Inhuman.
    Shattering.

    And in that same instant
    every piece of gear flickers back on.
    Recorders red.
    Spirit box blasting at full volume.

    You shout over the chaos.
    “Who are you?”

    The reply rips through the static.
    Warped. Inhuman.
    “We are YOU.”

    Another voice. Female.
    “She holds us here.”

    A gasp breaks the silence.
    One teammate steadies their recorder with trembling hands.

    “Who holds you?” you ask.
    The response is jagged.
    “Blood. Ritual. Door.”

    The word door repeats.
    Fading.
    Splintered.
    As if many voices are whispering it at once.

    Your team looks to you, uneasy.
    The same question in every eye.

  • The word won’t stop echoing.
    Door. Door. Door.

    You sweep the hall.
    It is hard to focus.
    Something feels like it is waiting.
    Your gut pulls you lower.
    You remember.
    The basement.

    That symbol under the stairs.
    Circular. Burned into the floor.
    Dark wax pooled in rings
    as if candles had been placed there
    again and again.

    You can’t shake the feeling that the
    owners left this out.
    Covered it with boxes,
    hoping you would never look closer.

    You lead the way down the narrow
    stairs.
    The smell hits first—burnt wax, damp
    wood.
    The tools still sit on the bench.
    But the air has shifted.

    One teammate stops short.
    “Boxes were moved,” she whispers. The nook is open.
    As if something wanted you to see.

    And there it is.
    The circle.
    Bigger now.
    Clearer.
    Symbols scorched into the floor.
    Candles melted into thick pools of wax.

    The EMF spikes.
    Your recorder clicks on by itself.
    A voice hisses through.
    Layered. Guttural.

    “The door is open.”

    The ground hums beneath your feet.
    Your chest tightens.
    You know you are standing on the anchor.

    Then movement.
    You glance up at the basement window.
    A pale face stares back.
    The wife.

    Her eyes widen when she realizes you see her.
    She bolts, vanishing into the night.
    The truth hits harder than the air in your lungs.
    The spirits are not the only ones hiding secrets.

  • The wife is gone.
    She vanished into the snow outside.
    Her secrets will have to wait.

    Anxiety builds as you realize the circle hums beneath your boots.
    You keep your team focused.

    The spirit box bursts to life.
    Layered voices cut through the static.
    “Door… door… door…”

    Your teammate grips your arm.
    “We’re standing on the opening.
    This is it.”

    The EMF shrieks.
    It’s hard to think.
    Symbols on the floor flicker faintly with light.

    You kneel closer.
    The static sharpens.
    A whisper cuts through.
    She feeds it.”

    The ground trembles.
    Vertigo rolls through you.
    Familiar.
    Like every open portal you’ve ever stood near.

    What has she been doing here?
    And why?

    Your head says follow the clergy’s instructions.
    Your gut says dig for answers.
    Maybe you can do both.

    One teammate looks pale, shaking.
    Her second case.
    It’s too much.

    You send Chris to take her outside.
    He nods, no argument.

    Three remain.
    You explain quickly.
    “We’ll set our gear around the circle.
    Perimeter coverage.
    Real-time comms device in the center.”

    They move without question.
    The vertigo grows stronger.
    Everyone feels it.
    No one says it.

    A teammate asks quietly,
    “So what now?”

    You steady yourself.
    “Well… one of you will try to make contact.
    I’ll start the prayers.”

    Another looks uneasy.
    “Are you sure? That’s not what they told us to do.”

    You meet their eyes.
    “I think we’ve been lied to.
    It’s hard to cleanse something when the owner is feeding it.”
    They nod.
    Silent.
    Waiting.

  • “Seal it,” you say.
    Your team nods.

    Holy water in hand, you trace the edge of the circle.
    Your voice rises in the prayers you memorized.
    Latin syllables echo against the stone.

    The devices wail.
    Red lights flare.
    The circle shimmers with heat.

    A teammate’s voice cuts through the roar.
    “It’s fighting back!”

    You can’t think about that now.
    You focus on your intention.

    The ground shakes.
    Impossible.

    Symbols glow red-hot beneath your boots.
    A pressure builds in your skull.
    A crawling under your skin.
    Like fire.

    You shout the last line of the prayer.
    Splash holy water into the center.

    The spirit box detonates in static.
    Voices shriek together.
    “YOU CANNOT END WHAT HAS BEGUN.”

    A blinding flash.
    Then silence.

    When your vision clears,
    you’re no longer in the basement.
    You’re standing outside the house.
    Breath fogging in the cold morning air.
    Your team looks dazed.

    Someone whispers,
    “Did we just… lose time?”

    The house looms behind you.
    A man’s voice drifts from the porch.
    “Thank you for coming all this way.”

    Chris taps your shoulder, pale, shaken.
    You turn as the couple approaches.

    “We’re at our wits’ end. We don’t know what to do anymore.”
    The woman’s eyes flick toward the house.
    “It’s been different today. Like it knows you’re here.”

    End of Story 9.

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